Snake's Valentine's Dilemma

Holy karp, I drew Snake. What the curd.

Anyway. I'm sure everyone and their brother used this idea already, but I'm currently obsessed with Pit and recently reread all of the comics at awkwardzombie.com, so I am comically inclined to do something related to Brawl.

Breaking in my new comic-making software, and it's freaking amazing. The only problem is I can't get the speech bubbles to have directional tails, so I hope it's possible to tell whom is talking.

The drawings get progressively worse as the comic goes on. I fail at drawing Ness (S wrath upon me). And HOLY KARP PIT'S EXPRESSION IN THE LAST PANEL. I have no idea what came over me.

I still can't believe I drew Snake. It's incredible. xD But you can tell Pit's my favorite, since he has the most detail on him.

</rant> HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY! I know I'm one day late; so sue me.

I may end up coloring this.

Please critique!